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Old 07-30-2006
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The Plep

i hgwit wom bad critichismoln last stories, sso im wiritng a good story here for you to enjoy

Sexy Woman Called Girl Woke Up And Went "AAA FUCKING HELL I'M A FUCKING BALLOON" And She Stroked Her Vagina

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Re: The Plep

It's a bit brief, but the idea's there .
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Re: The Plep

Do you mean 'The Plan'?
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Re: The Plep

A spellchecker might help.

Learn the basics of grammar. I found The Blue Quill to be useful when I was starting out.

It's a bit short and that's because you tell and don't show. For example, show the transformation sequence from woman to balloon. Maybe she could dream it since she was sleeping at the time.

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