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Old 04-10-2006
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Man >> gorilla

Hello everyone. This is my first TF-story I made up yesterday. I'm from the Netherlands so my English isn't thát great, so that explains the small grammer-errors. Anyway, I hope you enjoy.

A man runs like mad through a huge green forest. Pushing away the leeves and brenches before his face, like he is escaping from someone, or something. The forest seems endless. But then, the green peacefull forest ends, and the man sees a road. The road that will lead him to society. The road stretches out to the horizon and just above that horizon, the sun sets down. He is only a few steps away now. A few cars pass by on the road, but they don't notice him, nor does he seem to notice them. He turns back to view the forest. He looks carefully, and sees a group of chimps swinging through the trees. He stares at them, silent, and the chimps stare back at him.

He drops down on the ground and feels the dirty soil. Then, he gets a strange feeling in stomache. He lets out a slight scream. Not even a few seconds later, he feels his pants pushing against his legs. The strange feeling grows further into his body down his legs, and his feet begin to hurt. His brown leather shoes burts open and reveal a hand-like feet. He gently moves his newly achieved toes, as the skin on his primate-feet turn more and more black. The feeling grows even more stronger, as his pants begins to rip open from feet to bottom, revealing a nice, big, black fur. The only part of his pants that remains is the upside, but you can clearly see some pressure on that part as well. Again the man released a scream, but this time a lot harsher then before. The feeling continues as he slowly views his armes. He watches how the growing fur on his arm continues under his sleeves. He slowly holds his hands before his face, and watches how the colour of his skin turn into that of his newly achieved fur - black. He shapes his hands into a fist, and see's how his fingernails turn bigger and thicker, just like his hands. At that point, his shirt sleeves also begin to rip, showing the fur on his arm in all his glory. Then he feels a great pain in his head. The head-ache keeps getting worse, and seems to drain al his memory, and in return, giving him a primate-instinct. He opens his mouth to scream even louder, and we see his teeth growing larger and more dangerous. With that, the lower-part of his face grows, shaping his head into that of a gorilla. He falls down on the ground, but gently stands up using his knuckles. With his fearsome ape-hands he tears the last part of his shirt that survived the transformation of his body. As that part of the shirt falls to the ground, a name-tag that was attached on the shirt also fell down with it. It says "Marc, EAV lab-scientist". Marc in his new ancestrial form, turns around and enters the forest, searching for his kind.
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Cool. I like it. Build on that and it'll be awesome.
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